Here is my finished brochure:
STAR HOLIDAY BROCHURE TO NEW YORK

I then watched the assembly, which was all about HOPE, and this was good but it made me upset. It did make me realise how much I was missing friends and family. I remembered how my Grandad Wales had HOPE when he went on his TREK OF HOPE to the Himalayas. I decided to draw a picture with the things that give me hope. Here it is:
I was looking forward to English because I knew I would be writing a character description. I followed the Oak National lesson and looked at the success criteria so I knew what I had to include. I tried my best to show my character's features, appearance rather than just telling what she looked like. I planned out some key phrases and words and set out my structure. I am pleased with the result:
Love the picture Seren. Hopefully it won't be long now before you see all your friends again.
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